I am sorry that I can't comment your audio in time cuz I can't play it on my computer. I guess the reason is that your fie is in the format of wav. I emailed Silvia to see what she can do. I will reply it as soon as she emails me back.
I think the length of your story is okay. If you want to show more pics in your digital story, you probably can slow down a little bit. One more tip is that you can add some transition words in your narration. For example, when you talk about the happy time of your grandparents and parents and then you say they divorced. "However" may be a good transition word. It helps listeners to know there is a change. Moreover, you can have different tones when discribing the happy time and divorce time.
I think that the length and pace of your reading are fine. As you stated, you plan on pausing more in your final recording and leaving time for just pictures, which I agree will enhance your story. I liked how your ending provided questions for reflection by the audience rather than just wrapping up the story.
I am sorry that I can't comment your audio in time cuz I can't play it on my computer. I guess the reason is that your fie is in the format of wav. I emailed Silvia to see what she can do. I will reply it as soon as she emails me back.
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ReplyDeleteI think the length of your story is okay. If you want to show more pics in your digital story, you probably can slow down a little bit. One more tip is that you can add some transition words in your narration. For example, when you talk about the happy time of your grandparents and parents and then you say they divorced. "However" may be a good transition word. It helps listeners to know there is a change. Moreover, you can have different tones when discribing the happy time and divorce time.
I think that the length and pace of your reading are fine. As you stated, you plan on pausing more in your final recording and leaving time for just pictures, which I agree will enhance your story. I liked how your ending provided questions for reflection by the audience rather than just wrapping up the story.
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